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@@ -55,13 +55,13 @@ activities \parencite{principles}:
\item[\emph{Impact analysis, mitigation, and evaluation of residual impacts.}]
- The analysis of impacts and proposed actions to mitigate them is
- one of the major steps in preparing environmental impact
- statements. This step is usually performed by the proponents. How to
- fairly establish the significance of residual impacts (i.e. impacts
+ Identifying and analysing impacts as well as proposing actions to
+ mitigate them are major steps in preparing environmental impact
+ statements. These steps are usually performed by the proponents. How
+ to fairly establish the significance of residual impacts (i.e. impacts
that cannot be mitigated effectively but are also considered to be
minor) is frequently subject of debates. According to \textcite{wood},
- ``significance evaluation \ldots remains one of the most complex,
+ ``significance evaluation \ldots{} remains one of the most complex,
contentious, and least-understood aspects of EIA systems across the
globe''.