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 \section{Discussion}
 
-This section discusses common issues of EIA implementations in general
-and how these issues are addressed in New Zealand's approach (if
-applicable). New Zealand's integrated and devolved approach to
-environmental assessment also brings about difficulties that are not
-shared by the implementations in other countries; these issues will
-also be analysed in this section.
+This section discusses common problems of EIA implementations as they
+relate to the RMA, as well as issues that New Zealand's integrated and
+devolved approach to environmental assessment brought about.
 
 
 \subsection{The quality of assessments}