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author | rekado <rekado@elephly.net> | 2013-05-11 20:16:39 +0800 |
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committer | rekado <rekado@elephly.net> | 2013-05-11 20:16:39 +0800 |
commit | adf39ddbaafd7763a8ed57eed412cbf485fc7fcc (patch) | |
tree | 03825d56894836ac1e7db325538ba4adb41082a5 | |
parent | 2727dc5dfb2eac4f39d1b203875e6a4104068513 (diff) |
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diff --git a/assignment2/document.tex b/assignment2/document.tex index 2fc9e99..7f13262 100644 --- a/assignment2/document.tex +++ b/assignment2/document.tex @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ % to address the potential impacts of the proposed development \input{mitigation} - {\footnotesize{Approximate word count: 2500}} + {\footnotesize{Approximate word count: 2880}} \printbibliography[heading=bibnumbered] diff --git a/assignment2/mitigation.tex b/assignment2/mitigation.tex index 9cdf874..607b1d6 100644 --- a/assignment2/mitigation.tex +++ b/assignment2/mitigation.tex @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ compensation for an impact on a particular component of the environment are referred to as mitigation measures. Keeping in mind that EIA is a decision-making tool that includes weighing negative and positive impacts against each other, mitigation may also include -actions that promote or increase the benefitial effects of a proposed +actions that promote or increase the beneficial effects of a proposed development \parencite{mitigation}. As proposed activities can cause adverse effects far from the project site that would not normally be addressed in a cost benefit analysis, mitigation is also a way by @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ no standard method to proactively measure the many potential unintended side-effects of a mitigation measure \parencite[compare][]{mitigation}. As a mitigation measure and associated monitoring can be very expensive, the project planners have -to consider alternatives to proposed activites early on in the +to consider alternatives to proposed activities early on in the planning process. The requirement for listing mitigation measures in the EIA process hence encourages an inclusive, open approach to development. @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ aquatic ecosystems and existing fish and invertebrate populations. A new factory should be designed to use less water; this could be accomplished by reusing water where reuse does not have sanitary implications (e.g. using grey water for cooling). To prevent serious -problems associated with temporary overallocation (such as hostile +problems associated with temporary over-allocation (such as hostile rises in water temperatures due to low flow or water levels), key indicators near the factory site need to be monitored constantly. diff --git a/assignment2/potential-effects.tex b/assignment2/potential-effects.tex index 25b59a2..2e37e1c 100644 --- a/assignment2/potential-effects.tex +++ b/assignment2/potential-effects.tex @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ % 830 words -% actual: 1200+ words +% actual: 1220+ words \section{Proposed activities and their potential effects} -All three major stations in the lifecycle of the proposed dairy +All three major stations in the life cycle of the proposed dairy factory have to be considered for an assessment of the potential effects of the project: preparation of the site and construction, operation, and eventual close-down of the facility. For the purposes @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ construction in proximity to the river as well as the proposed take and discharge activities during operation of the factory have direct effects on water quality parameters. Changes to the properties of the body of water (e.g. sediment load, changes in flow patterns, increases -in nutrient levels) affect not merely aesthetical values held by +in nutrient levels) affect not merely aesthetic values held by residents of the affected region, but are likely to have impacts on the composition of aquatic communities and the health of riparian and aquatic ecosystems. @@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ of the sink waterway by more than one to two degrees \parencite{chemical}. -\subsection{Other activites and socio-economic effects} +\subsection{Other activities and socio-economic effects} Related activities such as the transport of raw materials from farms to the factory and the transport of finished products to local stores @@ -157,10 +157,10 @@ effects could lead to a reduction of life quality for residents in this area. The inventory of impacts does not end here, however. The potentially -benefitial effects of the proposed project also have to be considered +beneficial effects of the proposed project also have to be considered and---if possible--quantified. The establishment of a dairy factory close to dairy farms provides a boost to the local and national economy and creates numerous job opportunities---temporary jobs for construction workers as well as stable employment for engineers, -maintenance personell, factory workers, managers, and in the +maintenance personnel, factory workers, managers, and in the transportation sector.
\ No newline at end of file diff --git a/assignment2/significance.tex b/assignment2/significance.tex index 16b8f39..b764726 100644 --- a/assignment2/significance.tex +++ b/assignment2/significance.tex @@ -1,4 +1,5 @@ % 1070 words +% actual: ~1040 words % Explain how you would identify the significant effects. Discuss % any difficulties in determining the significance of effects in EIA @@ -26,7 +27,7 @@ One of the goals of impact assessment is to weigh the desired positive impacts of a proposal against the expected negative impacts in order to evaluate whether the project plan should be pursued or discarded. The dairy factory could, for example, result in an increase in the -number of employment opportunities, enlargen the economic basis of the +number of employment opportunities, enlarge the economic basis of the region, increase the country's export volume, etc. While it is possible to quantify many of these positive effects (e.g. by estimating from experience with similar projects) it is not clear how @@ -94,7 +95,7 @@ wastewater and river water, but also on the cumulative temperature increase due to human activity reflected in the mean temperature of the affected body of water. Case studies can be used to estimate the magnitude of the impact. If the limit on water temperature would be -exceeded by the plant's wastewaster discharge, the impact would be +exceeded by the plant's wastewater discharge, the impact would be rated as significant and in need of mitigation to avoid significant effects on the aquatic ecosystem. The same approach is applicable for any impact that affects quantifiable environmental properties, such as |