song2: stick: Minor improvements to stanzas.

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/02-song2/parts/stick.ly b/02-song2/parts/stick.ly
index 10b0ed0..d8bf966 100644
--- a/02-song2/parts/stick.ly
+++ b/02-song2/parts/stick.ly
@@ -49,28 +49,27 @@ stickStanzaRight = \relative c' {
     <a d>8 r16 <a d>8 r16
     <gis d'>4 r8 <gis d'> r |
   } \alternative {
-    { <d' g>8 r16 <d g>8 r16 <d fis>4. r4 |}
+    { <d' g>8 r16 <d g>8 r16 <d fis>2 r8 |}
     { <d  g>8 r16 <d g>8 r16 <d fis>8 ~ <d fis>2 |}
   }
 }
 
 stickBLeft = \relative c {
   \repeat unfold 2 {
-    <cis gis'>4. <fis, cis'>4\sustainOn fis4 cis'8\sustainOff |
+    <cis gis'>4.\arpeggio <fis, cis'>4\arpeggio\sustainOn fis4 cis'8\sustainOff |
   } \alternative {
     { a,8 cis'4 e,4\sustainOn b'8 gis' e,\sustainOff |}
-    %% TODO: not happy with this
-    { cis r16 dis8 r16 e8 ~ e2 |}
+    { cis' r16 dis8 r16 e8 ~ e2 |}
   }
 }
 
 stickBRight = \relative c' {
-  <b e>8 r16 <b e>8 r16
+  <b e>8\arpeggio r16 <b e>8 r16
   <ais e'>4 r8 <ais e'> r |
   a8. ~ <a e'>8 a16 gis2 r8 |
 
   <b e>8 r16 <b e>8 r16 <ais e'>4 r8 <ais e'> r |
-  <e' a>8 r16 fis8 r16 <e gis>4. r4 |
+  <e' a>8 r16 <fis a>8 r16 <e gis>2 r8 |
 }
 
 stickTransitionLeft = \relative c, {