From ef0704f0e2052af2525aa6a1d6d12dddc40e98d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ricardo Wurmus <rekado@elephly.net>
Date: Wed, 4 Jan 2017 22:27:28 +0100
Subject: white noise: stick: Correct fast part.

---
 04-white-noise/music/stick.ly | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to '04-white-noise')

diff --git a/04-white-noise/music/stick.ly b/04-white-noise/music/stick.ly
index 1cfdf7e..d4757d7 100644
--- a/04-white-noise/music/stick.ly
+++ b/04-white-noise/music/stick.ly
@@ -124,30 +124,30 @@ stickFastLeft = \relative fis' {
   \time 4/4
   %% TODO: this doesn't render well
   \change Staff = "stick right"
-  <a\2 cis\1>8\mp_\markup {\italic { both hands on melody side }} s s s <a\2 cis\1> s s s |
+  <a\2 cis\1>8_\markup {\italic { both hands on melody side }} s s s <a\2 cis\1> s s s |
   <b\2 e\1> s s s <b\2 e\1> s s s |
   \change Staff = "stick left"
-  d,,8\8-4 d'8\10-1 ~ d4 ~ d2 |
-  <b'\9-1 fis\10-1>8 q q q q q r4 |
+  <d,\9-4 fis\10-1> s s s <d\9-4 fis\10-1> s s s |
+  <b\9-1 fis\10-1>8 q q q q q r4 |
 
   \change Staff = "stick right"
-  <a\2 cis\1>8 s s s <a\2 cis\1> s s s |
+  <a'\2 cis\1>8 s s s <a\2 cis\1> s s s |
   <b\2 e\1> s s s <b\2 e\1> s s s |
   \change Staff = "stick left"
-  d,,8\8-4 d'8\10-1 ~ d4 ~ d2 |
-  <b'\9-1 fis\10-1>8 q q q <cis\9-1 gis\10-1>4-. r |
+  <d,\9-4 fis\10-1> s s s <d\9-4 fis\10-1> s s s |
+  <b\9-1 fis\10-1>8 q q q <cis\9-1 gis\10-1>4-. r |
 }
 
 stickFastRight = \relative fis' {
   \time 4/4
-  r8\mp fis16\5-3 a\4-2 cis8\3-1-. <fis,\5-3 a\4-2 cis\3-1>-. r fis\5-3 <a\4-2 cis\3-1> r |
+  r8 fis16\5-3 a\4-2 cis8\3-1-. <fis,\5-3 a\4-2 cis\3-1>-. r fis\5-3 <a\4-2 cis\3-1> r |
   r8 gis16\4-3 cis\3-2 e8\2-1-. <gis,\4-3 cis\3-2 e\2-1>-. r e'\2-1 fis4\2-3 |
-  r8 r16 fis,\4-4 a8\3-2 cis8\2-1 ~ cis8 d8\2-2 cis4\2-1 |
-  <gis\3-1 d'\2-2>8 q q q <gis\3-1 e'\2-3> q <gis\3-2 cis\2-1>4 |
+  r8 r16 fis,\4-4 a8\3-2 <fis\4-4 a\3-2 cis\2-1>8 ~ q8 d'8\2-2 cis4\2-1 |
+  <gis\3-1 d'\2-2>8 q q q <gis\3-1 e'\2-3> q <gis\3-2 c\2-1>4 |
 
   r8 fis16\5-3 a\4-2 cis8\3-1-. <fis,\5-3 a\4-2 cis\3-1>-. r fis\5-3 <a\4-2 cis\3-1> r |
   r8 gis16\4-3 cis\3-2 e8\2-1-. <gis,\4-3 cis\3-2 e\2-1>-. r e'\2-1 fis4\2-3 |
-  r8 r16 fis,\4-4 a8\3-2 cis8\2-1 ~ cis2 |
+  r8 r16 fis,\4-4 a8\3-2 <fis\4-4 a\3-2 cis\2-1>8 ~ q8 d'8\2-2 cis4\2-1 |
   <gis\3-1 d'\2-2>8 q q q <eis\4-3 gis\3-1 cis\2-1>4-. r |
 }
 
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